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Post by bluestar on Oct 8, 2006 17:02:13 GMT -5
Name: Bluestar
Age: 60 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank:Leader
Clan:Dawn
Apperance: Lightblue pelt with a white star on the chest. She also has white paws. She has large blueish black eyes that shine bright purple at night.She has medidum lenght fur and large white fangs and claws.Her face is kind and full of youth.Her eyes full of kindness.
Personality: Bluestar is wise, kind, and playful. She is as playful as a kit, and would play with any thing. She has only been leader for 2 moons, but she has saved the clans from war on each other. She is very wise even though she is playful .
History: She was a wise kit that loved to play, though that hasn't changed much. When she was an apprentice her name was Bluepaw She once had gotten chased by bee's into a tree, then chased back down the tree by angry squirrels, with nuts. Now every time she hears any one mention squirrels she runs and hides.She became a warrior and her name became Bluepelt .When her deputy was exiled for killing the medicine cat she was appointed new deputy for her wiseness she became really close to her leader but when her leader was killed by her exiled deputy she was outraged and she killed him she was then appointed leader.
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Post by Cloudedheart on Oct 8, 2006 19:00:00 GMT -5
Can you make the the history a little longer and leave out the saving the clans from war because we haven't developed a plot yet and the clans might be at war.
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Post by samigirl3 on Oct 8, 2006 19:19:12 GMT -5
And she would've had to be older. She's not allowed to be deputy untill she is 24 moons, let alone leader. I think at LEAST 70 moons is reasonable. Stormy can change it if she wants, but Echo is 90 moons and she's just a deputy.
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Post by Cloudedheart on Oct 8, 2006 19:29:11 GMT -5
Be at least 60 moons k?
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Post by bluestar on Oct 9, 2006 19:59:25 GMT -5
kk done
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Post by Cloudedheart on Oct 9, 2006 20:18:11 GMT -5
Accepted! Your grammars better lolz!
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